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what kind of amp should i get???

this is my first halfstack im ever purchasing and ive allways hap a line6 combo and a peavey tube combo. i play deathcore ex: suicide silence, chelsea grin, burning the masses, waking the cadaver. im in a band called silent storm [go add them, the profile is sick as fuck] im 3rd on there top friends, alex ate everybody. go add me if you want

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and were playing our first show on march sixth and i need a good halfstack that will give me the sound and gain i need. im 14 years old and i have a dean razorback and an epiphone explorer, and i need a halfstack under 1800 or somewere around there

Crate, Ampeg, or Marshall are all about as good as you can get.
Line6, I use them mostly for home / practice / recording ease. They kind of suck live.

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(Cheyne Stokes) by Chelsea Grin VOCAL COVER

Does this paragraph sound good?

I'm trying to write a romance-drama book because I've always wanted to be a author and so I wanted any constructive criticism. Please know, I'm younger than most of you think so please give the correct criticism but don't be too harsh. I also need some guy and girl names =)

I looked into his vibrant blue eyes and I knew, at that moment, what life could hold for us. I edged slowly towards him, puckering my lips ever so slightly. I gazed into those perfect eyes for a last second before our lips met. His were so cold yet so warming at the same time. I could hear his heart beating next to mine, our bodies intertwined so we were one. His hands made his way up to my chin and he relaxed his hand there. He carefully pulled away, awaiting my reaction. I was stunned that he still managed to keep that smug grin on his face. Slowly, carefully, I leaned in again but he just put his index finger to my lips and quietly left my room.

It's very good, but the frequency of he, his, my, and I make it a little redundant, and the shortness of each sentence gets a little annoying. Instead, perhaps try something like this;

"I looked into his vibrant blue eyes and knew in that moment what life could hold for us. Edging slowly towards him, my lips puckered ever so slightly, as I gazed into those perfect eyes one last second before our lips met. His were cold, and warm at the same time, and I could hear heart beating next to mine, our bodies intertwining so we became one. Hands making their way slowly up to my chin, he let them rest there, before carefully pulling away, anxiously awaiting my reaction. I was stunned that he still managed to keep the same smug grin on his face, and I slowly leaned in again. Raising his had, he put his index finger gently to my lips, and without a sound, left my room."

Haha, sorry to have messed with your work so much, my english teacher has been having me do stuff like this alot lately, and it's kinda molded into me now xD Writing is a passion of mine, so again, I'm sorry, I can't restrain myself. Good luck with your book!